My
meshal aldrees. I was born in
Saudi Arabia . I live in Riyadh which is the capital of Saudi
Arabia , i am the youngest one in my family . wen i was young i was vary Jealous from my oldest brothers Even though
thay are fifteen years
bigger than me , but i still jealous because
thay go to school but i am not i was too young for school wen i
entered the school i was very happy in the first year but after that when i moved to the
second year its start to be boring because schools in my country start at 7 am so its was
difficult for a child however my family was helping me after that i get used to it.
The sentence that starts with "When I was young I was very jealous..." could be a good transition to the next paragraph which should be about your childhood. Maybe you could start a new paragraph after that sentence. Can you combine any of the simple sentences into a compound sentence?
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